Teacher Feedback Of Main Cover

I thought that it would be very important to get feedback from people who are out of my target audience because they can pay very close attention to things I may not have picked up on myself. They are also more critical because they know exactly what to look for in a successful proffesional looking product. This sheet shows that I recieved both good and bad feedback. I now know that my choice of colours are working well and look good to the human eye. One critisim recieved was that my sub headings were hard to understand and dont stand out aswell as they could. From this I went back to my front cover and played around with different colour and font choices while asking for constant feedback to what my teachers or peers thought.